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Let Me Rest

As I lie here
a thousand ugly faces fill my mind,
haunting,
taunting,
screaming my name.
Confusion mingles panic
as I strive to understand
all these thoughts and emotions
whirling in my head.
Going round in circles
I never reach the end,
and as I close my eyes,
they scream my name again.

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  1. Date: 7/22/2011 11:31:00 AM

    How horrible, I hope this isn't really true for YOU, sweetie. You paint a strong picture of someone going mad!

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 10:34:00 AM

    I like here you were going with this, but I feel as though it could be explored further. 'Going round in circles' is also very cliche' but I understand and connect with the confusion you portray, keep it up x

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 10:34:00 AM

    I like here you were going with this, but I feel as though it could be explored further. 'Going round in circles' is also very cliche' but I understand and connect with the confusion you portray, keep it up x

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 10:07:00 AM

    surreal yet beautifully expressed with your pen so fluid, emma... very unique offering! :) huggs, nette

    Mantle Avatar Emma Mantle Date: 7/21/2011 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks nette for stopping by, much appreciated. Em :)