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Pebble

My heart
A pebble in water
Where your constant loving
Flows over me.
Keeping it clean
Every time, everyday.

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  1. Date: 8/10/2011 11:27:00 AM

    Congrats Robert on your 8th place win in the stones contest luv with this great piece..

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 10:55:00 PM

    Wonderful, short but replete with warm sentiment. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 8:06:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Bob. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 6:49:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 3:25:00 PM

    robert, warm cheers to you for an awesome win... love the way you depicted pebbles..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 2:03:00 PM

    Right on Robert. A great premise and analogy of your heart being a pebble in water. Short and sweet; to the point. Congratulations on your win~!

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 1:00:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Catie's "Stoned" contest Robert. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 8:42:00 PM

    wonderful.. enjoyed your poem,, have yourself a wonderful and blessed day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 6:14:00 AM

    Lovely piece. Great imagery. Best wishes Em :)

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 5:44:00 AM

    Wow! A really fine piece, well done Robert, best wishes.

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 5:36:00 AM

    very nice imagery. look forward to reading more...