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Yet Another Mortal To Be

This frustration strikes me each day
My efforts seem obsolete. 
With every passing second i think, 
if there's bliss i should ever meet? 

Life has got stagnant.
Even the air seems immobile.
I search for refuge, 
a friend of need, may be, for a while. 

I search for refuge, 
in poems of all might.
The darkest of them all 
to me, seem just right.

I crawl helplessly 
Battling the heart and mind. 
But the world is busy it seems 
To give a thought of such kind. 

Freedom is all that i need now 
I'm sighting an end thats truly mine.
And so there would be less to lose 
And quit life,
something i could never define! 




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  1. Date: 7/20/2011 7:36:00 PM

    Creative and interesting expressions and a nice attempt to write quatrain

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 4:31:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Swagat. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 3:00:00 AM

    The sadness of the poet comes through this, I hope this is just a poem and not your situation, it's good to let it out.