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  1. Date: 1/25/2015 10:40:00 PM
    Thank You... For the Insight and Inspiration .... I love the ending... My journey has just begun. I hope I can live up to the honor that God deserves. And be true to both families in this web of deceit ... May you keep us in your prays. Nina

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 11:13:00 AM
    wow i love this good job i love reading your poems

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 1:39:00 PM
    Dear David, what a deep emotional verse. The confusion of everyday living is dealt with in such a tender way here and I am so glad I found it.

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 2:17:00 AM
    In loving your child you know what joy comes with great responsibility. You love them every day and know nothing will ever compare. Thank you for your kind words and for truly understanding.

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 8:40:00 AM
    You have such a talent to set clear words to your messages.

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 8:40:00 AM
    You have such a talent to set clear words to your messages.

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 11:21:00 AM
    DAVID! This is fantastic! I'm saving this as a favourite! God bless you! Your poem works in so many ways, I loved the message, the phrasing, the meter... everything! And thank you for your comments on my poem. Smiles from Cyndi. PS- I plan on reading more of you, soon!

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 6:32:00 AM
    I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece David. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 12:39:00 AM
    Me again, this is such a stirring write, David-- and you bring about such a powerful message here as well. I love that thought that we are responsible in molding our children, that they follow our footsteps...Beautiful message...btw just want to help I think there's one typo for "occurred"-- really enjoyed this one, David, thanks for sharing :)