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Slow Love Slow Death

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Slow Love Slow Death

Slowly you entered my life
Slowly you made it beautiful
Slowly I took you to be mine
Slowly this life became wonderful

Slowly you made me love you
Slowly it increased with time
Slowly I was all yours
Slowly life became melodious as a rhyme

Slowly from me you got bored
Slowly you lost all interest
Slowly you craved to move on
Slowly I was left in a state of unrest

Slowly you left me
Slowly I became depressed and cold
Slowly I choked down, 'caus
Slowly I caught death in my hold

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  1. Date: 9/14/2011 11:11:00 AM
    Love the last line, -I caught death in my hold-

    Singh Avatar Guneet Singh
    Date: 9/15/2011 4:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Dinda..its great to have your comments
  1. Date: 7/19/2011 2:38:00 PM
    a moving emotional write Guneet and a romantic piece with brilliant beginning and untimely ending luv.. nothing lasts forever..shame.. even luv.. fascinating piece luv..

    Singh Avatar Guneet Singh
    Date: 9/15/2011 4:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot Linda for the lovely comment.
  1. Date: 7/19/2011 10:59:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today Guneet.

    Singh Avatar Guneet Singh
    Date: 9/15/2011 4:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks carol. have a nice day.