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Catch a clue

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Catch a clue

The multitude of fake people makes me shutter. I wish humanity would wipe away this clutter. Morbid I know, but I think I'd go that low to rid the world of those who romance such lies. Then theirs those that are lazy. These people simply drive me crazy. Those that have no drive sit on there couch with apple pie, getting so fat just waiting to die. Then in desperation you cry, cry, cry, Forget the wider door! It shouldn’t matter anymore> Find a strong will, to repair your weak heart. Getting off your ass makes a good start. How about those that are always angry? Some of them I wouldn’t mind to find hanging, In the closet of your choice. Hey I’m just your proactive supportive voice. We don’t need you around. With you everything’s a down. Conversation so bitter, It taste just like the ground. Maybe if you found a whore Your life wouldn’t be such a bore. Even then I don’t know if that will help you. Then there are those that are just to pretty. Stuck in the mirror, working themselves up into a tizzy. over there hair being a little frizzy. How about the too much makeup you put on? Girl you need clown shoes to complete that style. Why don’t you try going natural once and a while. Your vanity Not respectable. Even though under that paint your delectable, But still not respectable If any of this should ring true for you, All I can say is Catch a clue, because theirs really nobody that respects you

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  1. Date: 8/13/2011 1:23:00 AM
    Good write, read it enjoyed it. Thanks for your comments on my write. God bless all. bl

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 6:01:00 PM
    Awesome expressions, Jay

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 5:51:00 AM
    What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Jay. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 4:27:00 AM
    Me too, I am very much annoyed by fake people who chose Hypocrisy as a Saint. A bore and fat woman, as you dislike in your poem (some people told me that I was a bore since childhood and I stayed silent, I am also very fat but really that is not my fault) thinks that your poem is simple, speaking about disturbing things, details of reality, ironically. The bore ones are accepting the others too easily, that is their fault. They are usually too sincere, maybe I will write a poem to defend them.

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    Date: 7/18/2011 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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    o'neal Avatar jay o'neal
    Date: 7/18/2011 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi there, I would like to clarify that I said nothing of fat or boring woman. I was referring to LAZY people. Not people with medical conditions. There are a lot of people that wont get off there but to save there own life. READ IT AGAIN.. Thank you and have a lovely day.