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Caffeine-free

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Caffeine-free

The day is long
My attention's short
I've no energy to cavort

Business isn't done
I'm ready to quit
Time feels like a bottomless pit

I'm physically here
Mind - absentee
I shouldn't have drank the caffeine-free

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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:41:00 AM

    wow this another wonder from you. i like your approach to the subject, you write about. thanks for the comments on my stuff. i lived most of my life there in New Zealand for 36 years, i'm from the UK, and now i'm back in the UK. my two sons, one is in Perth Western Australia, and the other is still in Auckland thanks for your interest.. harry

    Rose Avatar Spanish Rose Date: 9/19/2012 6:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! Very nice. I believe I have relatives in Salter Pointe, near Perth? Maybe? Although I have never met them. Very interesting and exciting about where you are from! You must have a wonderful accent :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2011 6:12:00 PM

    Ha Ha...I enjoyed it!

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 6:24:00 PM

    LOL!!!! cute and sooo real...thanks for sharing!!!

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 4:28:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Spanish. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 9:49:00 PM

    Well, you really took me to the experience of having drank some caffeine-free....it is almost a sin! :D Really enjoyed reading your poem.

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 7:12:00 PM

    Creative and interesting expressions , Spanish Rose

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 7:04:00 PM

    oh no....coffee break anyone??