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I Need Some Air

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I Need Some Air

Give me some space
I need some air
somewhere I can let down my long hair
to just let me breathe
sit back and relax
all the stress is riding on my back
the pressures of it all
to do this and that
they need to take a little fall
before I fall down and crawl
on my hands and knees
begging anyone... please
help me take the burdens
and toss them in the fire
if just for tonight
because tonight I feel so tired

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  1. Date: 7/18/2011 4:38:00 AM
    What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Mermanda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 11:23:00 AM
    If nothing else keep the stress Clandestine, for now. I relate to this pain. Great write.