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  1. Date: 8/4/2011 12:03:00 PM
    Beautiful romantic sad you...old Jack

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 3:33:00 AM
    Love can be a hard thing to hold on to. Real love takes a real commitment from two people. It is hard when someone does not fully return your feelings of devotion...I've been there myself, a long time ago. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 11:41:00 AM
    Interesting write. The repetition a bit much from me, but liked it all the same. good job. jay.