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Kissed By A Butterfly

What seemed like an ordinary day, turned special in a most peculiar way. My friend 
Polly and I set out to see the "House of Butterflies" , eagerly anticipating to see the 
elegant, graceful, glorious creatures. When we stepped inside , scores of other 
people all about, all in wonder we took in the explosion of colors, all of the rainbow 
and even more.

We moved slowly casting our eyes all about, not wanting to miss a thing no doubt. 
Then Polly said "look Jack a butterfly has landed on your head" , much to my suprise 
I glanced in one of the many mirrors all about and there on my head sat a glorious 
blue and yellow butterfly! We slowly moved along beholding their delicate grace and 
beauty. Of the scores of people there, I was the only one with a butterfly on my 
head. As we neared the exit the butterfly moved onto my cheek and I got a 
delightful sensation, a tiny kiss on my cheek ,Then this feeling gripped me, a feeling I 
have rarely experienced, I felt special~~kissed by a butterfly~~.

Then the fans they used to keep them inside, wisped the butterfly from my cheek. 
Another feeling exploded from deep within, I so longed to go back and experience it 
once again. To find my butterfly friend and to once again be ~~kissed by a 
butterfly~~.

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  1. Date: 7/16/2011 3:28:00 PM

    WAs this in CA? I went to such a place near SF I think. Very cute idea you had to call it Kissed by a Butterfly!

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 3:26:00 PM

    Jack Thank you so much for a beautiful comment, Beautiful write here much love Dawn x

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 10:18:00 AM

    Very touching and heartfelt penning flows. Also thank you for your kind comment and marking on my poem "The thirteen steps "

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 10:20:00 PM

    how unique. the butterfly could of sense your appreciation of it's existence and wanted to thank you. wonderful -Always Alley

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 7:36:00 PM

    Awe wow, how wonderful! This is a heartwarming story! It gave me a smile and a beautiful image of a peculiar butterfly, giving a special man a little kiss. Thank you Jack for the comments on my work, I am honored. I love your work. You have a special way about your writings. Are you on any other websites? :)

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 7:05:00 PM

    Butterfly kisses, light n breezy, great story flow n feel. Think I was almost there :) on ya mate, Don

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 3:29:00 PM

    That is an exciting experience to have the butterflies land on one and stay around for awhile..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 2:34:00 PM

    ohhhh, poor jack...I want you to go back too... :) Nice read, (you don't live in Colorado do you?) we have a butterfly pavilion here...such a wonderful place. Maybe someday I'll be lucky enough to get a butterfly kiss