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CAMPFIRE

~CAMPFIRE~ 

I hunger to taste your solid wood stare
Me! And only you, no one else at all
Snuggling, under the stars
Hungry for each other’s ears.

Chasing every comet across the sky
Fierce when it comes to standing tall
Desires releasing screams from the mundane night
Running naked, throughout the world
Firewood burning the depth of our soul
Dancing in a way we put mortals to shame 
A cloud of grey shade arousing the night
Secret moans before morning dew hits sunrise.

Crawling around in circles
Feeling each other’s heart instincts
Surrendering to the ashes of our skin 
Passion lost deep in a dream-catchers web.

A pack of thieves we long to be
Weaving each other’s growls  
No one dares to separate the pack we create 
A stare of solid wood I hunger to taste. 


~night after night~ 
~IN THE MOOD~
~for you always~

dedicated to *N.D.*

by;p.d.

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  1. Date: 4/2/2013 1:27:00 PM

    GORGEOUS write, PD! Your sensual imagery is stunning. I can picture it perfectly in my mind.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 10:08:00 PM

    dark and sensual....I was just looking through some of your older stuff...Gnight

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:12:00 AM

    Just as your name implies : You did are total destruction in this work.The imagery herein is at its peak. CONGRATS.WELL DESERVED

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:51:00 PM

    This is just great stuff.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:59:00 AM

    Congrats PD! This is really passionate one and I enjoy it very much, love it! :D -Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:31:00 PM

    PD. Looks like you had a winner here too. I like The title, it fits the poem. Thanks for sharing and also for reading Angel Dust. Lucy

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 12:25:00 PM

    Gongratulations! Certainly a winner... A lovely verse indeed! Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:32:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your poem this evening,,captures the imagination,,congrats on your win,,,Love Debra

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 3:33:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS!!!! A GREAT POEM FROM A GREAT POET!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 9:34:00 PM

    Hi, When I first read this I commented how good it was. I am sorry for getting to you so late, but congratulations on your win, Poetry Soup is very prestigious. Congratulations. Lee

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 8:42:00 PM

    Belated, congrats on your win. Hope to find time to do some reading this eve.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 5:28:00 AM

    Howdy neighbor - Just checking out the soup winners and saw this wild and fierce lttle gem you wrote...wow! I envy your imagination and creativity... Thanks as always for the comments and support. The point of my "forgotten" poem was that the girl was treated no better than the frog...If I were rich I would have bought her the biggest headstone in the cemetary...hope your granddaugher is doing well - Tim

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:08:00 PM

    Dear (i hope you dont mind me calling you that ) lol ... but dear lady... its rarely that something has me holding my breath... but this most gorgeous write had me beneath the stars with my most desired.... such beautiful comparisons and visions.... I found this in competitions and i totally understand why... discreetly sensual... bravo bravo bravo...

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 7:59:00 AM

    Congrats on this ripping poetic rendition. I liked your pure animal instinct approach...

    White Avatar Mitch White Date: 4/24/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wish you could help me out with this type of passion. I have a script in desperate need. It's a story lacking the best of my friends best intentions. AND I miss you a little bit too.
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 2:23:00 PM

    immaculate write.Highly enjoyed.

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 6:07:00 AM

    I like this poem! For any outdoor's men who has experienced the lonelyness of one's own campfire and the comfort each gives the other, can relate to this poem.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 9:50:00 PM

    congratulations on the win ... i loved the vivid imagery ... very captivating write

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:30:00 PM

    congrats on your # two placing, well deserved. keep the good times rolling and meaningful poems coming.

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 6:39:00 AM

    This is a great poem. Congratulations on a very well deserved win in the contest. Pam.

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 1:05:00 PM

    This is good!

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 7:15:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!!!!

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Congratulations! ~Pokey~

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 8:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win for a very interesting and amazing poem.

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 4:33:00 PM

    Proof! Vindication ! of your special talent ,What could be sweeter .Congrats ,and Thank You for taking the time to comment on my work You Lift spirits, Love to You. Gregg Banter

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 5:25:00 PM

    Congrats P.D. on your ground-breaking win. One Love~O.O.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 5:11:00 PM

    A masterpiece and well deserving of the win.

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your incredible finish! Hope all is going well fo ryou!!! God bless you! JP

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 10:54:00 AM

    Congrats. P.D.ethereal poetry at it's best, worthy of a big win, love,vie

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 9:55:00 AM

    Dear PD, great pleasure to see you win... Super Congrats!! and a big bear hug to you. How have you been dear friend?

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 5:01:00 AM

    ((()))Clap! Clap! Congrats on the big win..Sara

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