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Bath Full of Tears With Rain From Me Crying

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Bath Full of Tears With Rain From Me Crying

I wanted to respond
to tell you how I adore
the way you look inside
as if I have no doors
the walls are blue
and yet the light is fading
the place is a wreck
and my heart is wading
floating here
barely beating
looking around and seeing my mess
how will I go on
how will I make it past this test
its a lonely place to be
inside of me 
war raging
who will ever want in
this prison I am condemned 
forgotten 
one lost soul
just tell me you want to look inside
if only just to see
see my spirit is still willing
although my heart continues fading
just like the walls
this deep indigo blue
like the color of my eyes
change when I look at you 
to blend with the sad sight
for I know we’d never be
curtains drew
I did it all for you
this poem could last forever
I have so much to say 
maybe one day you’ll listen 
and I know you will never fade away
dont walk away from my heart
dont tell me there is no spark
this quizzical look is just for you
I’m laying in this tub
naked and surrounded by a wannabe love
tears keep falling and its running over
years of longing are coming uncovered
yearning and needing 
things I thought I’d lost
look into your eyes
what would it be like
put a cork on my tears
and revive me back to life
for look inside you’ll know what to do

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