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YOU TOOK FROM ME

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YOU TOOK FROM ME

Seven years I could not laugh
You took a lot away from me
You took my happiness
Replaced it with your sappyness
Took my outgoing personality
Replaced it with your low mentality
Took my helpful ways
Gave me no praise
Took my spunkiness
Made me think I couldn't bounce back
Took my spirit away
Left me in dismay
Worse yet, you took my love from above
Threw it away like a piece of trash
I almost crashed
Treated me as a prized posession
Left me in a deep depression
One day I saw the light
Now you had a fight
My old spirit was coming back
That made you kind of wack
The light around me is growing bright
That kind of left you in fright
Cause you were losing sight
Of the best love that crashed in flight

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  1. Date: 7/14/2011 1:48:00 PM
    Very good, now expand on that and always remember this....YOU are in control, and give that to no one...at any expense. Great write.

    Alvarez Avatar Letitia Alvarez
    Date: 4/9/2014 9:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So much has happened since then. I finally dumped him. Life is great!