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                                             Sometimes I just start flowing, 
                                                Not necessarily knowing 
                                             Exactly which way I’m going. 
                                 When I get there you can connect the dots, 
                                                         Or rather
                               Trace my thoughts, because my bars be so hot -
                                           Their trails leave the paper glowing. 
                                    Something like how you can't see the wind
                              But by its destruction you can see where its been, 
                                               And feel when its blowing.

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  1. Date: 8/7/2011 2:17:00 PM
    Larry, heart to heart I totally understand what you are saying here.~Glenna~

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 10:12:00 AM
    Enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here today. I am happy to see you have shared a bit of your excellent writing with us today Larry. Heres hoping you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 12:12:00 AM
    Very well written..Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 11:08:00 PM
    I like the flow of words. Nicely written!!