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  1. Date: 7/14/2011 11:53:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry with luv..

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 11:04:00 AM
    brash, introspective, emotional, bunch of words a bunch said. good Poem, I like it.

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 5:26:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mermanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 9:54:00 PM
    If you're going to use no punctuation and words like "gonna," with emotional phrases like "sex is all I offer," why would you make it so bloody long? More importantly, the second stanza (paragraph) is an emotional firestorm, and I can appreciate that, and you certainly have some strong feelings that came out very well in this, so I can't help but think that you did a good job. 7.