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Vacation to Schizophrenia

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Vacation to Schizophrenia

A whole house aired with dust
and dark twilight at every hour,
there was a mountain— tall as rust
that made me feel a coward.

There were cans and cans on
tiled floor? More dust and dirt 
on towels. As a child, I clutched my teddy
bear, while inside I lost
some vowels.

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  1. Date: 5/3/2012 12:28:00 PM
    great write

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 5:31:00 AM
    ((()))Clap! Clap! Congrats on your win with this unique and creative work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 11:11:00 AM
    Congrats. Sarah on your super win, your poetry speaks volumes in the library of angels, love and light, vie

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 6:27:00 PM
    Mental illness, its on slaught, having to live cared for by someone who is not stable, becoming unglued oneself is a multifaceted "gift" I too wrote of madness, Van Gogh's madness but I know because my voyage has been so near the shoals, the rapture of the deep. Congrad's and LIght & Love

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Congrats on your win with this stirring piece, Sarah! :)

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 9:13:00 AM
    Sara, a beautiful poem friend, "Congratulations" on a worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Sarah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 2:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win x

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 11:26:00 PM
    Sarah~Congrats on your win...... a very wonderful poem.. Thank you for sharing your awesome poem. Take care and have yourself a good night ;-) always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 8:59:00 PM
    Way to go in the big Soup contest, Sarah. I enjoyed this one. Congratulations on its win.

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Sarah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 7:01:00 PM
    All I can say is two things!!!! 1) congrats on your work being featured, and 2) WOW!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:24:00 PM
    Congrats on being featured this month Sarah and love the poem, keep doing all that you do in writing.

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 12:10:00 PM
    "Tall as rust." I like that one - a loaded word. Kind of hits you in the freak-out place. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 6:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week Sarah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sarah

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 6:39:00 PM
    Nice rhyming with thoughtful expressions, Sarah

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 4:26:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sarah. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol