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Haiku -temptation

as if Eve's leaf fall                                               
on bare sandy bottoms                                      
soilbed awaits rain

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  1. Date: 10/12/2011 6:17:00 PM

    Ps. Smile, *^_^* “You See, Sooo Much Sooo That All I Wished Was to Tell Unto Your Sweeet Beauty, This Truth, My Beautiful Dear! *^_^* And I Forgot to Let Your Treasures Know That, Tis A Wonderful & Stirring Poe!” *

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 6:07:00 PM

    Smile, *^_^* “Ahhhh, I Do Not Know Exactly As Unto Why But, Ever Since My Dear John Told Myself In Detail of Your Radiant Beauty My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beyound, Extremely Beautiful Celene! *^_^* I Sometimes Find Myself, Daydreaming About Your Beauty!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 3:12:00 AM

    Me too...

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 3:30:00 PM

    The temptation is always there, Celene. As I understand it, Adam and Eve were nude until they bit into the apple and learned to feel shame. The natural outcome of falling to temptation. As to your question, the neurologist says there is no cure for my nerve damage. He can only treat it. The chiropractor disagrees and I want to have hope. My sister and I have parted ways. Gee, I wish I could talk to you. Love you, dear friend. Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 9:49:00 PM

    Interesting ... rain to wash away their sins perhaps?? Hey, thanks for making me your first poem of the day, you little sweetie pie!