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My Sun , My Moon, My Stars

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Below is the poem entitled My Sun , My Moon, My Stars which was written by poet Francine Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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My Sun , My Moon, My Stars

He is my sun, my moon, my stars,
he is each breath I take.
My soul and his are joined as one.
This is the vow I make.

He is each breath I take.
My life, my love, forever his.
This is the vow I make
as two hearts beat as one.

My life, my love, forever his 
as long as God allows.
As two hearts beat as one
while in each others arms.

As long as God allows,
when we die may it be
while in each others arms.
He is my own true love.

When we die, may it be,
my soul and his are joined as one.
He is my own true love.
He is my sun, my moon, my stars.

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  1. Date: 8/14/2011 8:58:00 PM
    such a dreamy write! if it were so for all of us what a different world this would be light & love

  1. Date: 7/11/2011 10:41:00 AM
    intoxicating me no end, francine... winning's best!.. thank you for appreciating my " pet" piece .. you brought me back to those precious times i had!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/11/2011 10:23:00 AM
    What a beautiful romantic piece, Francine. I find pantoums so hard. Thank you - your contest was a lot of fun, as always : )

  1. Date: 7/11/2011 8:34:00 AM
    I tired this form and was not successful nice job cory

  1. Date: 7/11/2011 2:26:00 AM
    Good poem. Poetry in one of its complex forms.

  1. Date: 7/11/2011 2:24:00 AM
    well-written and lovely