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SHE

Oh what a delight for me to see
The girl that I love, when she passes by me
Oh how I wish I could foresee
When I ask of her hand to be with me.

Simplicity, is she just like a lily
Until it blooms you won’t see its beauty
She never thought of things as complicated
Because of that she had me captivated.

She smiles and jokes like a child
And when with me is always mild
Her childish manners give her sweetness
This in turn loses my toughness.

Oh how I wish for her full attention
Because sometimes for her I am non existent
This is too bad for me when I mention
But for love I will always be persistent.

She will always be nostalgic
From time to time even it is tragic
Won’t she be mine, I don’t mind
But my love to her I will always find.

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  1. Date: 7/12/2011 4:06:00 AM

    Lovely portrayel of your intended. Your feelings have a similarity my friend.. Re My poem "Speach". I dont know how you would like me to elaborate, if you would like it in simplar terms or how i came across my affliction? For every thing speaks for itself. I get tensed in awkward situations that another person is everyday life, which effects my speach, i stutter or try to avoid conversation,when i know my feelings arn`t at ease and will stammer.

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 6:22:00 AM

    "smiles and jokes like a child" ahhh! My kind of lass! Magaling kapatid! Sulat ka pa... :)