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Scarred Respite

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Below is the poem entitled Scarred Respite which was written by poet Anula Aboobacker. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Scarred Respite

(The Poem is about young love which ends after a one night stand. The villain Rain seduces and makes love to the Protagonist, Young Earth, and leaves her with a cold stare without even a word of Love)
It rained that night, the summer respite. "Dry days are over," my heart mused, forever blind. Dew drop kisses, caressed the tresses, wet wave seeped, hardening almond bunches. During the darkest hour, was the non-stop shower. Winds with power, left the deepest scar. Bright Sabbath followed in vain, couldn't conceal my pain, when I saw through the rainbow, the smirk of the grey cold sky.

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  1. Date: 9/8/2011 4:19:00 AM

    very nice, i especially like the imagery in lines 4-8! good work and congrats.

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 11:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poet being featured this week Anula. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 11:05:00 AM

    very vivid poem, the imagery is incredible, the poem is ver good, keep on writing

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 5:18:00 PM

    Another good poem...liked it.

    Aboobacker Avatar Anula Aboobacker Date: 7/9/2011 10:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)