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Below is the poem entitled FORGETFULNESS which was written by poet GABRIEL LOPEZ. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Thick, white, penetrating fog;    
humidity suspended in space and time.    
You go away, and although it fences, you are already distant,    
little drops merge with your body.    
I don't try to stop you,    
because you chose your road;    
the fog is my allied one    
to approach me to the forgetfulness.

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  1. Date: 7/7/2011 5:35:00 AM
    What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your poetry in which you share a little of yourself maybe without even realizing it you have written from your soul. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Gabriel. Love, Carol