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One on his finger

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One on his finger


One on his finger, one in his nose;
Crackers and honey, marsh mellow toes;
Voluptuous women, desire that grows;
And what is the problem, he’ll never know
        Seashell collectors, wadding through waves;
        Tight fitting swimsuits, eyes now enslaved;
        And no matter the sizes, it passes the days;
        And is there a problem, can anyone say.
Kimono clad women, looking for tips;
Sweet tasting poppers, with hot mustard lips;
Rice wine and toppers, perspiring hips;
Hopeful attempts; served up in quips
      One on his finger, a sign on the door;
      Huddled together, with tears on the floor;
      Nothing to hope for, they’re gone ever more;
      But the movie continues, from mountains to shore
      

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  1. Date: 10/7/2011 5:59:00 PM

    Such a cute and fun verse, Leo!! Lots of imagery to fill all the senses!! Nicely done! Love, Mikki

    Taormina Avatar Leonard Taormina Date: 10/8/2011 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks michelle; long time no hear.
  1. Date: 7/23/2011 8:50:00 PM

    A fascinating verse done with great style. So glad I found you.

    Taormina Avatar Leonard Taormina Date: 10/8/2011 7:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi elizabeth sorry it took so long to reply I've been blocked for a very long stretch
  1. Date: 7/12/2011 7:40:00 PM

    been a long time but you still have your touch. john

    Taormina Avatar Leonard Taormina Date: 10/8/2011 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you're kind sir and thank you.