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lost in your thoughts

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lost in your thoughts

I escaped the narrow lives of solitude
to taste the wine of your love. 
You showered on me your contagious charm . 
I am enslaved with your thoughts . 
I wish there was ONE place  in the globe 
where lovers could built those beautiful hopes . 
If death knocks me out before the blissful kiss
just walk into the graveyard 
and there you will find your red fiery 
dazzling even in the twilight



I hope you like this one :-)

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  1. Date: 12/14/2011 9:34:00 AM
    Mesmerising, such a beautifully painted piece, there is ONE place on this globe where that is possible, our hearts! X

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 10:02:00 AM
    yes! amazing work......,lovely Smriti ji.

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 7:16:00 PM
    Smriti this is so deeply emotional an invitation of greatest luv.. intensity influences dramatic.. thankxx for your sweet comments so welcome on my poetry.. appreciate much luv..

  1. Date: 7/6/2011 3:46:00 PM
    Lovely romantic write. You are a wonderful writer. I like your style. Love and Light, Vienna

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 8:05:00 PM
    I like the idea of a romantic escape in this one. Wishing you the best from New York City. Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 1:01:00 PM
    I did not get here first....but let death meet you long after billions of blissful kisses.

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 1:01:00 PM
    I did not get here first....but let death meet you long after billions of blissful kisses.

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 8:15:00 AM
    I do like this one...A LOT...MANY TIMES! - Kyle