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Firefly

Mouths gasp in wonder-
mystical lights dance in tune,
breathless concourses in awe
As God's creatures glow.
Brighter than cool, darkened nights-
Seas of fireflies ignite

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  1. Date: 7/19/2011 7:55:00 AM

    beautiful nature write Beth, if we could only see it in this light always

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 8:31:00 PM

    Beautfiu Choka, Beth. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 1:18:00 PM

    Congrats on 1st Place, Beth. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 12:26:00 PM

    Congrats Beth on your first place win with this wonderful write luv..

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 11:25:00 AM

    Your final line here; "Seas of fireflies ignite", makes me wish I was a tiny firefly. Kudos! Over the top! ~ECMc

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 9:07:00 AM

    Congratulations Beth for your win in the contest "A Poem You Like" sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 7:50:00 AM

    Thanks again everyone: I love the positivity of all you soup members! :)

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 6:12:00 AM

    Super Congrats!!!! on your wonderful win...always Michael

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 1:26:00 AM

    really nice, beth..special KUDOS to you for top, superb win!...huggs

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 9:59:00 AM

    :) Thanks! Like the doctor fish? Those things are really cool. Actually it's rather funny, I live in a place where there aren't any fireflies... For some reason I didn't actually believe that they really glowed until I saw them for the first time this past Friday during a senior trip to New York! :)

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 8:42:00 AM

    enjoyed reading today....fireflies are an interesting creature. Have you seen the deep ocean explorations and all the creatures down there have some glowing capabilities due to the darkness.

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 7:28:00 PM

    I love fireflys. Nice poem. Love, Vie