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Fallen Tree

Limp, numb, abandoned 
Beautiful core darkened sadly 
Footprints now walk on 




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  1. Date: 6/29/2011 1:35:00 PM

    Beautiful images with nice turn of thought in the last line, Ashley

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 12:02:00 PM

    I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Ashley. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 11:46:00 PM

    I like how the last line was very haiku like!