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About This Poem

Love Notion

soft kiss lingers on
moistened and primed inner thoughts….
pulsing heart trembles

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Sensuous Senryu” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Francine Robert
July 26, 2011

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    Dinda Minardi
    Date: 7/10/2011 7:42:00 AM
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    Awww... very sweet :)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/10/2011 12:59:00 AM
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    so I see you got placed with this one NICELY done. It is very good, Caryl.
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    Emma Mantle
    Date: 6/30/2011 3:41:00 AM
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    Congrats Caryl. So beautifully penned. Best wishes Em :)
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 6/28/2011 2:44:00 AM
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    Dear Caryl, I expected to see this in the winners' circle. Congratulations, dear! Love, Carolyn
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 6/27/2011 9:03:00 PM
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    Congrats! Im so happy that you such a great win. BG
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 6/27/2011 2:37:00 PM
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    Caryl, congratulations on your awesome win in Francine's contest ;) love you title!! love Wilma

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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 6/27/2011 1:56:00 PM
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    oohhh LOVE line three finely some sensory input!! [no need for capital "s" same rules as haiku no capitalization] and so "right" to include all this tactil info in a love verse! You go! Light & Love
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 6/27/2011 1:26:00 PM
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    Congrats Caryl on your spectacular win with this sensuous senryu my friend.. perfect words luv..
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 6/27/2011 11:57:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 6/27/2011 11:51:00 AM
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    My congratulations onthe win in the contest of francine, Caryl
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    Francine Roberts
    Date: 6/27/2011 10:03:00 AM
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    congrats on your 5th place win in the contest with this steamy number
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 6/26/2011 6:26:00 PM
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    Nice visual, Caryl
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 6/26/2011 5:09:00 PM
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    very sultry lines Caryl.. am sure Francine will count as one of her winners luv.. u got my vote on sexy senryu .. good luck..
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    Renee Hendricks
    Date: 6/26/2011 3:35:00 PM
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    Beautiful! Good luck in the contest!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 6/26/2011 2:52:00 PM
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    This is very nice. It's very geared for the way the woman feels. Which for me is really great. (I tried making mine like what a man likes. haha) Luv, andrea
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 6/26/2011 1:26:00 PM
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    Wow! Very, very sensual, Caryl. Need a cold shower now and will send you the bill. LOL I can't write well of passion, but you this is certainly worthy of a high place in Francine's contest. Thanks for stopping by. My time here is limited by dr.'s orders to stay off the computer, but I'm so glad I saw this senryu. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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    Katherine Stella
    Date: 6/26/2011 11:41:00 AM
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    omg Caryl this should blow others right out of water with such passion outstanding entry for contest I too did one but not as sultry as thi thanks for sharing and for your kind comments on my poem for rambling poets contest best of luck to you my friend
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 6/26/2011 11:21:00 AM
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    I'm gad I'm not judging this contest... another perfect write and entry... Very nice.....always Michael


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