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A cruel laughter

This key, how it laughs!- how it taunts!
how it shows proof of a heart to unlock.
Yet with every atempt it leaps from my grasp,
And plays a cruel game of hide and seek.
A game from which mine heart wanes.
Now i find the key..

Only to hear the cruel laughter once more.

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  1. Date: 7/1/2011 8:59:00 PM

    great write congrats on your great win

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 5:24:00 AM

    A belated congratulations Daniel on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 7:04:00 PM

    very cool, how you make that key come to life with its cruel laughter. I enjoyed this one on the winner's list!

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 6:51:00 AM

    Congrats Daniel on your amazing win in the contest with this dynamic entry luv..enjoy..