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Thinking revised (Enroll today)

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Thinking revised (Enroll today)

I lived to die today
To say goodbye again
tomorrow, unattainable it
may be, unexplainable the sorrow
seems to me, with last notes
in concession, head fast the
past confessions, indiscretions pave
unholy ways, cementing rules to the
games we play, tools we use for
last times are never just that, forever
to elude the facts, but never intending
to conclude the impending inner
strife, that impales with threat the
scales of life with Russian roulette, uniformed
in straight jackets, we tend to revisit
mental asylums with dark exhibits, we
often fail to revise common knowledge, the
logic that nobody gets out alive, we surf
the brainwaves like it’s merely a sport, and
pulsate in this, the school of thought

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