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A Scolding from My Muse

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A Scolding from My Muse

For Miranda Lambert’s “Inspired” contest
By Carolyn Devonshire


I wanted to write for this contest;
But my muse was staging a protest.
     “Take me to the sea,” it pled,
     “In this house, I languish, dead;
Put me in touch with nature, a forest.”

“Don’t stare at a screen, confined by walls;
Locked inside, my inspiration falls.
     Surely there’s a babbling brook
     Or a valley’s overlook.
Give me something to work with,” muse calls.

“If you fail to respond, I’ll attack
As you’re sleeping in a room black.
     Thoughts you will never recall
     Cannot upon your page fall;
Without me you’re nothing but a hack!”

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  1. Date: 7/28/2011 9:09:00 PM

    Love limericks Carolyn and this is great.

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 5:40:00 PM

    UT OH! tough muse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 2:27:00 PM

    So cute and very creative. Congratulations. Love, Vie

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 8:53:00 PM

    Love it..SO creative are you..Congrats on the win..

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 7:50:00 PM

    a big congrats for this one. probably one of the funniest, Carolyn.

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 5:00:00 PM

    Creative ....Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 12:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 11:26:00 AM

    Congratulations Carolyn on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 7:30:00 AM

    I love this! Congratulations on your win! So clever!

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 6:14:00 AM

    My congratulations on the win in the contest of Miranda, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 8:18:00 PM

    congrats on your win in the contest. cory

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 1:07:00 PM

    Your muse is quite busy hey?? You had me smiling with these series of limerick Carolyn, all the best for the contest, love wilma

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 1:01:00 PM

    Enyoyed the way you describe your work with inspiration of your muse, Carolyn.. glad i checked your work out, am thinking of you.!

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 11:43:00 AM

    Sometimes the fuse can light the muse eh Caolyn - great thoughts on the intricisies of writing.

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 10:56:00 AM

    Of the muse you must keep track or become nothing but a hack. Poetry by Austinfellow. Now don't ya be scolding. I really dig your poem. Hope you are doing better with the health problem. Love, daver

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 3:52:00 AM

    Best of luck in Miranda's contest with this nicely penned contribution, dear Carolyn! I hope that you'll enjoy an relaxing weekend!...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 6:47:00 PM

    You are hardly a hack. You are beatiful and talented. I hope that you are feelinf well! Send me Soup Mail! My best always! I have been both real busy and real distracted. Love, Gerard!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 2:30:00 PM

    LOL, hope you obliged your muse and took her somewhere she enjoyed : )

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 12:44:00 PM

    wonderful write, enjoyed this one good luck in contest.

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 10:47:00 AM

    Wonderful! I enjoyed your conflict with Muse.It's quite exceptional,dear friend

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 12:16:00 AM

    When booty calls...ANSWER! Nice piece and You are soo cool for leaving me such uplifting comments! I am glad you like my liddle riddles! Viagra Falls Calls, Now run...or should I say SAIL away and look out below!

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 1:40:00 PM

    Yes. I sometimes feel that I'm shut-in, but there is a window looking out into a garden. I like your muse. LOve, Dave

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 10:40:00 AM

    Too cute my friend. Been there and done that. If you have time check out my, "THE WOULD BE POET" Really got a boot out of this one. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 10:04:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this one, Carolyn :) Very cute approach you did with your entry! But I just bet your muse is mighty happy with what you came up with here ;) hugs

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 7:27:00 AM

    Wonderful approach to do the contest Carolyn.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 11:20:00 PM

    It's such fun to write of one's muse, particularly when they go AWOL on ya. Good luck with the contest with your cute set of limericks. Our minds think alike. I did three too!

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 7:31:00 PM

    How true how true, your last stanza devotes this soul to you ! *smiles* A wonderful 'Limerick' dear poet for sure ! Great entry dear Carolyn ! Miss you much..Have a blessed week my dear friend ! ...much love, james

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 6:46:00 PM

    Super angle on the contest....great angle in general. Yup, my muse enjoys going outside. And it also wakes up in the wee hours of the morning with pristine clarity. Drives me absolutely bonkers sometimes. Actually this isn't true, as I was born crazy. Best wishes, Carolyn.

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 6:30:00 PM

    A great take on the contest, should stand alone on top. Your comments mean the world to me and that you always get my writes. Always a good thing to see you writing. With love Michael

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 6:29:00 PM

    rotfl. At least your muse is fighting back. Mine is soooo lazy. It's rather happy for me to be reading others' works instead of doing my own. A good read, Carolyn, as ever. Best of luck to you in Miranda's contest. Hugs, Licia. xxx

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