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The suicide crime scene

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The suicide crime scene

Our feet patter a dusty tune
Edinburgh traffic plumes
One good eye surveys the scene.

Suddenly – a flash of yellow
Dashes across blurred vision
Police line - do not cross.

Curiosity beats a steady rhythm
We weave through traffic
Feel the shame of indiscretion.

Once at the tall railings
You hoist me up to look
I feel cold metal chafe my hands.

Peeking over, I gasp at the drop
gazing down at the street below
A screen obscures the view.

“Please get down from there!”
I drop down, grab your hand
We run away like naughty children.

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  1. Date: 4/8/2012 4:36:00 PM
    What a dramatic yet, poetic memory you have penned.

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 1:41:00 PM
    very creative piece of fine poetry, enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on Summers Gone By.