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About This Poem

Outshine in night time

Alternate forms times

Illustration expressive

Bye shadowed.. instigation



For rick Parise's shadows & form contest..

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  1. Mac Donald Avatar
    Michelle Mac Donald
    Date: 6/8/2012 3:36:00 PM
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    Oh, a haiku, been seeing lots lately!:) This certainly gives offers light, Joe, this mysterious form. Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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    Judy Ball
    Date: 1/28/2012 4:36:00 PM
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    The thing with this type of poem is to say much with few words. You do this very well as always. God Bless, JB
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    James Fraser
    Date: 1/2/2012 3:30:00 PM
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    Alternate illustrations stir up our instigations, writers prerogative and allowance. Cracking Haiku Joe and it's good to see you here. My poem of the lady in the dress is no dream. She exists, as this link will witness. I'm a very lucky guy :) http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/lorena-2.php
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 10/30/2011 7:19:00 PM
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    Great haiky Joe, it is a form I am learning about. Hard to pack a message into so few words but this is says a lot.

    wesley Avatar elizabeth wesley Date: 10/30/2011 7:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    haiku - sorry!!!
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    Date: 9/26/2011 5:53:00 PM
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    Interesting use of this concise form. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Thank you for your comment. Karen
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    T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet
    Date: 8/27/2011 4:33:00 PM
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    Fabulous haiku Joe.Appreciate your lovely comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/11/2011 11:15:00 PM
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    I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Joe. Love, Carol
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    Matthew Anish
    Date: 8/10/2011 2:51:00 PM
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    This night poem is quite evocative. Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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    Judy Ball
    Date: 7/8/2011 4:26:00 AM
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    There seems to be something about the very ealy wee hours that makes time seem to stand still and for a little while all is at peace. I love to walk with my dogs at this time. Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB
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    Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.
    Date: 7/3/2011 3:52:00 PM
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    First of all, good luck in the contest. I like this. You are an intriguing writer Joe.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 6/27/2011 5:10:00 PM
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    Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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    Judy Ball
    Date: 6/27/2011 9:43:00 AM
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    Nice job my friend. The night is alive with a thousand different sights and sounds. You just have to be there to experience it. God Bless, JB
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    DON JOHNSON
    Date: 6/25/2011 3:22:00 PM
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    Looking good to me, not n authority, Yes i had 5 attacks by white ant, usually skirting boards eaten... Diesel stinks a bit, none 4 twelve months. they don't like the sauce. Shriek till they're hoarse... on ya mate, Don
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    James Foulk
    Date: 6/21/2011 8:56:00 PM
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    a very nice Haiku, enjoyed reading it.
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 6/21/2011 3:05:00 PM
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    so deep and heavily intense Joe.. good luck in the contest and thankxx for your vote of confidence in my IMAGES entry..means so much and appreciate the encouragement too..luv..
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 6/20/2011 8:52:00 AM
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    Hey Joe, how's the summer treating you?? Enjoyed reading this little popper poem.
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    Anne Rutherford
    Date: 6/19/2011 3:04:00 PM
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    Wow good one . A winner I think. Anne
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 6/19/2011 12:06:00 PM
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    Exquisitely written, Joe. You make the reader "think" with ths one. Rick is sure to appreciate it. Wishing you success in his contest! Love, Carolyn
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    Michelle Mac Donald
    Date: 6/19/2011 8:51:00 AM
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    Hi Joe! "instigation", a prompt that you've certainly used as an inspiration here! Happy Father's Day!! Wishing you and yours the best!! Mikki Good luck with the contest...you're a winner, probably twice, for your entry.:)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 6/18/2011 6:17:00 PM
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    Unique presentation, Joe! I don't know how Rick will judge these very differing poems he is getting from lines and shadows!
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 6/18/2011 11:53:00 AM
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    A visual created with great and apt images, Joe
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 6/18/2011 3:43:00 AM
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    originality at ots best, joe.. winning wishes... huggs! :)


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