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Home Brew

There once was a friend of mine,
Who was famed for making wine.
Her visits were great,
As she brought a crate -
But I lost a week each time.


For Francine's Bottle of Wine contest, written 17th June

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  1. Date: 7/14/2011 3:28:00 PM

    I loved this one first time round Jack. It reads even better second time, hic!! :)

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 12:09:00 PM

    Cangrats on your win Jack, it is witty and sooooo cool!

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 4:52:00 PM

    What a cute little Limerick. Loved it. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 12:00:00 PM

    A great win for a great verse.

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 3:17:00 AM

    So happy to see you ranking high with this great, witty write, Jack. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 11:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Bottle Of Wine" contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 5:47:00 PM

    Congrats Jack..hope your lost week was devine. lol. BG

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 1:57:00 PM

    Congrats on the win Jack - I really liked a lot of the limericks on wine in this contest. Mike

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 7:14:00 AM

    Congrats Jack on this too cool poem and a great big win .. your home brew has u topping the list luv..enjoy..

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 7:23:00 PM

    funny one Jack Nd it'l;l certainly do it to ya! Congrats to you on your win

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 5:01:00 PM

    Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 4:55:00 PM

    I remember this and it was one of my faves for the contest. congrats on your high win.

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 4:17:00 PM

    love the humour in this one Jack , congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 2:34:00 PM

    excellent meter! nice wrap up too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 9:51:00 AM

    Nothing like a crate to cement friendship. lol Congratulations on your well-deserved placement, Jack. :))

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 7:48:00 AM

    Nice! Congrats. to you on your win!

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 4:43:00 AM

    Reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed the humor..Good luck...If that friend visited much, one would lose part of their life...Sara

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 4:17:00 PM

    LOL! A very clever write. I'm sure you'll do well in the contest! Lots of luck :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 2:56:00 PM

    thankxx Jack for your great comments on all my poetry luv.. keeps a gal encouraged and inspired my friend..appreciate the luv..luv..

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 8:24:00 AM

    OH NO! Is that what happens? Boy I better get the old calendars out and see how much time I've lost vs how much I got left! Trouble! :) Always a pleasure reading your stuff Mr. Jack. Hey wait, while I got you here, does that week lost rule count with Jack Daniels? I hope not!

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 10:55:00 AM

    ah the effects of enjoying the brew Jack.. but so worth it ..losing that week luv..clever ..and creative my friend.. good luck in the contest..

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 6:56:00 AM

    Love your Limerick Jack. I so love wine Jack, sadly I can't drink much as the acid in them affects me. Good luck in Francine's contest :)

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 8:27:00 PM

    oh, my gosh, I just saw the assignment PD gave you. Hahahaha. sEstinas take ME hours to do. I 'm so glad I did not ask for an assigment. (I've seen other poets getting ones hard like yours too!)

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 8:26:00 PM

    Great fun. Losing a whole week! I guess a crate can do that to ya!!!

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:35:00 PM

    Poetry Assignment# Form: Sestina Poetry ~~ Category: war, mystery, sad, and inspirational ~ Title: * it takes two to make a tear *

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:31:00 PM

    wow! good luck Jack,,,hope to see you running a few contest yourself... and I will send you the assignment~ it will be waiting for you when you wake up, or out of work... take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:03:00 PM

    How time flies when women bring crates of wine! Great entry for Francine's contest, Jack. Wish I had time to write for it now because it will surely fill fast. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 2:59:00 PM

    LOL, been there done that Jack... Great smiles as I pop the cork of a nice Merlot

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 2:43:00 PM

    My grandfather once went to jail for making moon shine, he got one year. and he was in his 70's at the time, but they let him out after a few months. this was a funny one, really enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Warm Breezes.