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Sailing

Smoking seagul wind
deep blue sea horizon breeze
great white shadow eyes


 June/17/2011 



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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 1:44:00 AM

    I got sunshine

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:22:00 PM

    Very nice imagery!

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:50:00 AM

    Sensitive and beautiful stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:51:00 PM

    D.G... ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 6:19:00 PM

    Lovely haiku with great images penned so well, Diminix

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:48:00 PM

    poetry assignment# Form: (30 lines+) free verse Catagory: love, devotion, nature, and art~~~ Title: "Dangerous ceramic doll"

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:37:00 PM

    i am with carolyn,,, and thanks for the comment... also...i will send assignment shortly,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:00:00 PM

    As a boater I can really appreciate the image you have painted in your lovely haiku, Dominix. Are the "great white shadow eyes" referring to clouds passing by? Thanks for your comment. Best wishes, Carolyn