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Rotational Poles

In a ravaging mind
devoid of plain vision,
all purpose of motion
gets abandoned on hold
once losing that stable
clarity of judgment,

still paying off judgments
with tortures taxing mind;
gusts fill tissues stable
regardless of vision
to load each vessel hold
using sanguine motion.

I present my motion
to lungs before judgment,
proving walls never hold
since logic doesn’t mind
the destructive vision
in cosmic clues stable,

this teeming soul stable
directing with motion
doppelganger visions
sequestered for judgment
once prevalent in mind
with each mortal I hold.

Such trajectories hold
orbits rendered stable,
illusions of the mind
fooling sense of motion
despite viral judgment
from idols with vision

provoking this vision
enthralled in steady hold
until the Last Judgment
pulls apart my stable,
a tremolo motion
tearing the public mind.

Such judgments of vision
shall mind my living hold
stable in fierce motion.

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  1. Date: 1/4/2012 12:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals John W. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 7:56:00 AM
    wowser now that one heck of a convoluted thought process, goodness, you and I would pick sestinas to enter which LOL I've been buff shining mine for over a year and folks still say [what huh?] I was actually trying to make them FEEL insanity..in yours perhaps you were trying to make us feel ..torn, rebuilt, growing beyond the bounds of rationallity? Any way I wanted to say NICE to read you again congrad's on getting through round 1. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 7:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol