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FALLING BRIDGES

The greatest miracle happened in days of yore  
unsurpassed, two millennia past or more 
a carpenter by trade, Joseph by name
was betrothed to Mary, a virtuous dame
Joseph, proud of his virgin, unbesmirched 
beamed when their banns were recited in church 

Mary had a visitor who descended in light 
when the angel spoke she cowered in fright
"Fear not, chosen one, there's a child in your belly,
You'll name Him Jesus,  certainly not Kelly."
"How can you be sure?  I've not been with a guy."
"Must I spell it out?  His father is God most high." 

When Mary told Joseph he was caught off-guard   
to accept Mary's tale was decidedly hard
his intended, purportedly as pure as they come
was with child from another;  a soon-to-be mum
An angel of God appeared in splendour:
"Joseph, to no mortal did Mary surrender."
now, Joseph was righteous, obedient to God 
ahead of the wedding date they then tied the knot
the people, deprived of a wedding reception 
snickered:  "What's with Joseph?  This is clearly deception."

The newlyweds were obviously broke
Joseph told Mary:  "My wife, don your cloak.
no way we can afford to pay taxes to them
we'll go to my birthplace;  it's called Bethlehem 
off they set with Mary on a donkey
for days on end over the hills of Galilee 

All the tax evaders had crowded Bethlehem
not an inn in the place could accommodate them
Joseph pled and begged as well he was able
one innkeeper directed them to an unkempt stable
in amongst animals, vermin, dirt and filth 
Mary, the Virgin, to our Saviour gave birth
she wrapped Him in cloth;  to protect Him from danger
laid Him gently to rest in a hay-lined manger

Humankind then and now reaps the advantages
that Jesus has come to mend falling bridges 

FOR P.D.'S CONTEST.  NO TIME TO CHECK THE TITLE.  I'M AGAINST THE CLOCK.

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 8:52:00 AM

    Wow! Also, thank you for your comment on my poem... I'm not the best!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 11:38:00 PM

    This was such an inventive piece of writing. I thought it quite an original take on the story of Christ, mixed with a bit of humor through out. I liked how the rhymes all felt natural and unforced... good narrative!

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 10:07:00 AM

    A very interesting observation of the birth of our Savior. Well done my friend.

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 3:03:00 PM

    nicely written Delysia....glory to the King of Kings....

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 8:24:00 PM

    Yes, I remember this one too. congrats to you. YOu did very well against the clock!!

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 2:26:00 PM

    Many congrats on all your recent wins, Delysia : )

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 11:08:00 AM

    I sure enjoyed reading this, Delysia, especially with how you also put in some modern feel to it :) Super congrats on your win :D

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 11:06:00 AM

    Awesome descrption of the untraditional relationship between Joseph and Mary. Love the perspective you chose and the form is beautiful, Delysia. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 10:43:00 AM

    I was kinda caught off guard here. Such an unexpected write from you(for me anyway), and you did a super job here. Congratulations on your win, Delysia~!

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 5:03:00 AM

    Congratulations Delysia on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 5:02:00 AM

    computer woes fixed yet luv?

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 5:01:00 AM

    Congrats delysia on your fantastic win with this dazzling assignment my friend.. a wonderful write and a wow one too.. enjoy luv..

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 4:05:00 AM

    My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., delysia

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 12:48:00 AM

    swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 12:43:00 AM

    Hi,, hi! D.h., ,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 6:20:00 PM

    For running against a clock this is great stuff. True to fact storyline with great imagery. I know if you had given it just a bit more time the rhyme, rhythm and cadence would be perfect because I like it just the way it is. Good stuff my friend. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 6:56:00 AM

    Beautiful poetry girl. this is another of me favs. come to think of it I think I got all your poems in me fav file hehe. I am around just working on a book at the moment.

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 5:48:00 AM

    Good luck in P.D's contest hun xxx cool poem :)

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 2:48:00 AM

    A stunning entry Delysia, it would be so cool to see what the specs for your assignment was.. Wishing you all the best for the contest.. stay warm :-)

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 6:16:00 PM

    This is on the same order of my Nimbeltockie and Ragamoo masterpiece. I haven't seen pd's contest and if you haven't seen Debbie Guzzies mine is for hers. Very interesting and good luck. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 6:07:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your story of Jesus' birth..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Cody is going to be okay.They will just have to get him on antidepressives again...I am exhausted but that will get better..Thanks for your concern..Sara

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 5:32:00 PM

    Oh, Delysia. my goodness, you tried so hard. What exactly were the criteria in your specific challenge? It was to be rhymed and religious and anything else? Whether a few details were accurate or not, I give you BIG kudos on pulling this off in a timely fashion. Hope it does well for ya, sweetie!!

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 1:54:00 PM

    Excellent write, I really loved this one. Jeff

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 3:35:00 PM

    Very nice Bravo!!!!! WOnderful words compliment this great theme...luv Michael

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 1:16:00 PM

    an utterly beautiful recollection of the Christmas Story told ..very inspirational delysia.. your gift is phenomenal luv.. a wonderful message ..happy weekend my friend with luv..luv..

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 12:47:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Delysia. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 12:29:00 PM

    In the limited time allowed, and the format being given to you, I think you did a remarkably good job here. A dramatic tale told well, with a few light touches as well! Good luck in the contest. Regards, Robert.

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 11:18:00 PM

    you took this biblical story to new poetic heights, delysia.. well-done! winning wishes to you! :) hugggs, nette