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Brutal salvation

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Brutal salvation

Sip that blood .. fill thy melancholic heart
bandage my deep wounds then dig me a grave
may my life begin if I shall depart 
for the mortuary life had me enslaved 
and my conscious mind cursed his sanity 
scattered am I among those frosty dreams 
to proceed my road to eternity
and satirize the life I won't redeem 
so tolerate my sin .. accept my wrath 
for in this perfect world am incomplete 
survived by death .. anxious for my last breath 
drift in grief as I flip my final sheet 
thus I rot shrouded by desperation 
till I'm blessed with thy brutal salvation

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  1. Date: 1/4/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Samar. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 8:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Samar. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:19:00 PM

    wow! thanks for asking for the assignment... after seeing you have not much poetry here.,... i will glady read both... than give you assingment... great deep and dark poem,,,, take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 1:29:00 PM

    Creative and brilliant expressions with nice title with oxymoron, samar

    Saleh Avatar Samar Saleh Date: 6/16/2011 4:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot, glad you liked it :)
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 8:55:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup. A great first offering. I look forward to more. BobQ

    Saleh Avatar Samar Saleh Date: 6/16/2011 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Bob, i'm happy to be here and looking forward to share more poems and thoughts :)
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 6:00:00 AM

    the name on this one caught my eye so i had to stop and read it. this is a very good dark poem i hope it is not to real for you. too many people have a hard life and you write to good to know that kind of salvation. enjoyed reading your poem p.d.

    Saleh Avatar Samar Saleh Date: 6/16/2011 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks, the poem expresses my thoughts but in a certain mood, i'm glad you liked it :)
    Saleh Avatar Samar Saleh Date: 6/16/2011 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks, the poem expresses my thoughts but in a certain mood, i'm glad you liked it :)
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 5:40:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Samar. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

    Saleh Avatar Samar Saleh Date: 6/16/2011 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot Carol, i already loved the site, and i'm looking forward to read for all the poets here and share my thoughts with you here, thanks for the wishes :)