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Summers sun

Sun, 
sunshine,
sizzling rays;
so splendidly
sending us summers sensational tan.

Sunbathers swallow in the sweet sunshine;
shorts, sandals, shades,
sunblock, and 
summers
sun.

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  1. Date: 7/11/2011 6:53:00 AM

    good morning~Edwin,., how are you? And yes this time I missed alot. I sure missed you and your poetry. the sun here in Texas... is SUN.... thanks for sharing,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 2:57:00 PM

    Perfect description of these glorious days and all the fun and ease they bring. Enjoyed! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 6:10:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Edwin. I will be back again to read more. Hope you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 11:39:00 PM

    i'm taken by this, edwin.. great content with alliteration to boot! winning cheers fror you :) hugggs, nette

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 5:33:00 PM

    beautiful images with unforce alliteration, good luck in the contest, Edwin

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 2:30:00 PM

    warm and sunny is the forcast for this write... great poetry my friend..