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Oxygen

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Oxygen

You are the oxygen that I need to live. Please do not keep your self away from me 
because I am dying slowing because you are absent from me. I need and want you 
in order to live. Stop being invisible, an emerge in order to rescue me, I love you my 
beloved. I belong to you and you belong to me.

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  1. Date: 7/10/2011 12:49:00 PM
    Great job here. I was moved. You have a way with words that remind me of my own. Keep up the great work

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 6:34:00 PM
    Yes, really fine personification of love,