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Is this really how love
naturally should feel?
Stomach tied in knots,
ingredients of constructing an ordeal.

Maybe I'm paranoid,
some may just say.
You'll fall head first into love,
and your thoughts may change.

Your heart thrusts so loud,
just as it is thunder.
Sincerely, I call him mine!
I'll travel back in time and wonder.

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  1. Date: 6/30/2011 5:44:00 AM

    Congratulations Addie on your win in Brian Strand's "Five To 14" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 5:19:00 AM

    Beautiful, Addie. Many congrat's on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 3:36:00 PM

    Conratulations Addie on a fine win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 1:15:00 PM

    Congrats Addie on your super win with this lovely poetry luv..

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 12:12:00 AM

    short and sweet...congrats.

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 3:34:00 AM

    NICE POEM, LOVE IT WELL AND SO MUCH.

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 11:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Addie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 10:44:00 AM

    My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Addie

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 10:12:00 PM

    Congrats Addie on your featured poem this week on PS. a wonderful piece to share luv..