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Reality Of Mind

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Below is the poem entitled Reality Of Mind which was written by poet Dan Maclellan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Reality Of Mind

The mind of the lost, is nowhere  inside.
Dreams of this twisted third eye.
Torturing images, no martyr could bear.
It's the craziness that evokes this primal fear.
Crazy in madness, a house of black cards.
A sand storm of terror, that pump the blood hard.
Fooled in this game, there is no win.
Welcome those feelings and let it all in.
 
How are you feeling? It's only inside.
How are you feeling? Is it burning your eyes?
How are you feeling? Lost and so blind.
How does it feel? In Reality of mind.
 
Chaotic is breathing, you feel yourself fall.
Slip from the grip of your reality's wall.
Awake in a nightmare, shedding red tears
Praying for sanity that no one will hear
Flesh is cold and dampened with sweat
your eyes in the demon are all that you fret.
Grasping at strings you pray that you'll live
The pay for you penance, one soul to give.
 
How are you feeling? It's only inside.
How are you feeling? Is it burning your eyes?
How are you feeling? Lost and so blind.
How does it feel? In Reality of mind.

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  1. Date: 8/6/2012 9:47:00 PM
    DAN, Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care. *Luv* PD

  1. Date: 7/5/2011 6:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dan. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 3:24:00 PM
    you are a very VERY good writer i hope that you keep writing for us,, i like the pictures you paint of insanity

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 8:40:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 8:11:00 AM
    Very profound poetry my friend...Michael

    Maclellan Avatar Dan Maclellan
    Date: 6/12/2011 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much