Below is the poem entitled Immortal which was written by poet
Larus. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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A wonderful life of victory shares a day of losses. There is nothing too sad that you
cant’ be proud, if you really believe life is about gratefulness, bright lights and
breaking down barriers. When you open yourself up to the world , life responds as
affable to any bitter moments. Happiness comes to people when they realize that
its not about being bad, but what you have done great your whole life.
A smile received is an answer to gratitude. Those who share important moments
and memories with sincerity, are those who have the most to gain. A person who
suffers can carry on for life the remorse of never looking back to the beauty
encircled from within. When someone offers you a hand, extend your emotions to
respond well to their gesture of kindness. Some people die and never have time to
say thank you, I love you, you made my day. This is a regret.
A humiliating failure comes with the strength to carry on. When you feel your
lowest in your life, that’s when you have the inner power to change things for
better, and change your destiny. Those who battle against torn, have no regret or
feel sorry for what they have done. There is no shame in admitting to your self that
you were weak. The shame comes when you fail to accept your own mistakes and
blame it on something or someone else.
To be immortal is to be able to see others as unique and different from you. No one
is better because of their words or their communication skills. What make us stand
is the ability to proclaim ourselves as still learning, even when others think we are
the best inspiration they could ever have. We are simply dust against our gigantic
universe. Those who can’t accept life for its grandiose never feel the scent of true
love. The difference of each personality, is what make humans prone to discover a
new reality every day.
An abysmal day of losses may never hit a victorious life. People are too immersed in
finding explanations to every fall, every mistake or weakness that they share. Those
who seek an explanation to why they lose a moment, may never see the results of
living in glory. Don’t let a single episode take you down. Look at it as if it brought
you tears of joy for the upcoming moments that you’ll never forget. Live life, love life,
greet life for its moments of sadness or gladness. The experience to live life in full is
what will bring you peace at the end. Nothing matters when you are gone, and
always remember that people may or may not care.