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Face to Face with Fear

I was afraid to swim
till I looked deeper in the sea 
and found my blue sky
opened my wings upon waves
and flew up reaching high.
I was afraid to fly
till I looked deeper in the sky
and found my celestene sea
I swam above clouds
overcoming all doubts
believing in al that is me.
The sky became my sea
the sea became my sky
Everytime I got scared,
I looked fear in the eye
Testing my courage within
I knew that somehow I'll win
Somehow I'll make it through
as long as determination lives
I still be alive in the savage blue.

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  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:29:00 AM

    I too, liked this one Celene, We all experience fear at some time in our lives. Your poem would help the folk in need. Have a God day. Dave.

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 5:31:00 PM

    Just great and no wonder we take to each other there is NO fear greater than FEAR...and we'll have none of it! Thanks for your kind comment. Light & Love Ma

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 4:03:00 AM

    Very impressing poem, Celene, enjoyed the read this early afternoon and thank you for your friendly comments on White Water Lilies. I am still having problems with my right arm and hand so I am not able to comment as I want to. Have a great weekend!...Gert:)

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 11:36:00 PM

    Excellent poem on fear Celene. I will look for you again next time. Nice meeting you in PS. Dalila

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 10:32:00 AM

    Imaginative and expressive write. Eventually we are all confronted by our fears and we have to deal with them the best we can. I like this poem very much. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work, Celene. Kind regards, Robert.

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 1:41:00 PM

    Very captivating images almost nostalic in a way as well. Thank you

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 7:57:00 AM

    This is massive and very inspirational :)

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 10:23:00 AM

    I really enjoyed this one CC...TAH and thanks for the comments on mine :)

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 11:24:00 AM

    really like how you approach fear here, Celene-- very inspiring and happy to read your poem today, I hope all is well with you,dearie :) hugs :D

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 9:01:00 PM

    excellent as it is beautiful Celene my sweet friend so dear.. tremendous words of overcoming fear by looking beyond it with your mind luv.. your determination is a superb creation to inspire all who read this luv..

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 8:16:00 PM

    Very visual way of looking at fear and courage, Celene. Glad I saw this one today. Hope you are having a lovely weekend!