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Get-together at Midnights

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Get-together at Midnights

The roar abates,
My sea is serene like sleep.
Dream renovates
The inmost shore, where,often, they gather.

The love deepens,
So they all come, breaking open lids.
Dream livens,
So the dead wake up like the midnight flowers.

My dad smiles,
My childhood returns from its grave.
He hails,
But the words collide and scatter in.

The blue midnight…………..
A cat eyed girl creeps like a snake on the shore.
The dreamy midnight…………
My grandma retells on, but she feels fatigue never.

The fireflies fly,
Then vanish with the midnights to come again.
All die,
And disappear, but all die never.

FABIYAS M V

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  1. Date: 10/10/2011 2:27:00 PM
    I like how the write is as dreamy and open ended as the topic! BIG congrad's Light & love

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 10:06:00 PM
    Congrats. Fabiyas on your special poetry win. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 5:19:00 PM
    Congrats Fabiyas on a wonderful win with this beautiful entry on the dream theme..luv..enjoy my friend and thankxx for your kind comments...

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 12:00:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Fabiyas, Well done

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 11:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 6:50:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one..Sara

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 11:53:00 PM
    Excellent write with wonderful imagery here...enjoyed.Thanks for your kind comment at my poetry page..

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 6:18:00 PM
    a lovely dedication am sure everyone will enjoy FABIYAS.. vivid visuals and imagery in this piece my friend.. the dreamy midnight is a great line .. and Dad smiles.. my life returns from the grave just hit home for me as my Daddy also deceased but so spiritually strong in my life...so nice to hear u are enjoying your new job ..much success my friend.. keep in touch as u can luv.. always missing u and your poetry ..

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 1:23:00 PM
    Hello, Fabiyas, all is well with you, I hope. Must be busy as not seen much on PS,

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 12:23:00 PM
    Love the irony in that last verse, Fabiyas. The fireflies "die and disappear, but all die never." They are resurrected each day at sundown. Also appreciated the unique form you employed in this poem. In all but one verse, you have a subject and verb in the first line. Very cool! Nice to see you posting again, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 11:14:00 AM
    i am so honored to be the first to comment on this vividly written piece, fabiyas.. terricic; grouindbreaking! thanks for dedicating this to all of us.... we may rest but still thrive best as poets... huggs! :) nette