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Smiling Firefly

Firefly dances
confident above the toad
soaring in the night

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  1. Date: 6/27/2011 10:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Ashley. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 1:03:00 AM

    Vivid images conveyed in this lovely Haiku, Asheley. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 12:19:00 AM

    Love fireflies.. Congrats Ashley on your win in this contest... gautami

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 5:33:00 PM

    Interesting..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 11:07:00 PM

    This is so cute, I can just picture this vividly, Ashley with that firefly sort of teasing the toad :) Lovely image and super congrats on your win :D

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 10:14:00 PM

    Intriguing angle of imagery and thoughts in your haiku here, Ashley. Good job and congratulations on the win~!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 9:08:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the haiku contest, Ashley.

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 6:44:00 PM

    Congrats Ashley on your beautiful win in the contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy another great win with luv..

  1. Date: 6/8/2011 7:02:00 PM

    Beautiful images in the haiku, Ashley

  1. Date: 6/8/2011 4:53:00 PM

    that's the beauty of nature, enjoyed your haiku, take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/8/2011 1:16:00 PM

    When you only use ten words in a poem it can be a struggle, not here, i even like that there is only one firefly, not an "s" to be seen, though we all know they were! Enjoyed cheers.