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kittens

needles and wool twine
frolic and playtime
creatures we adore

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  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:05:00 AM

    perfect picture!i love kittens and this poem makes me smile..>>charmane

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 3:45:00 PM

    this was very well written.. cory

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 9:07:00 PM

    Susan, you can call this one a senryu! It's adorable. If you prefer traditional senryu, you only would need to add two syllables to the middle line,but as it stands it can be also a modern senryu!

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 5:36:00 PM

    yes we do, hopefully I will find one soon! Thanks so much for the kind words and stopping by I'm always available for help just soup mail me. Light & Love

    Mills Avatar Susan Mills Date: 6/10/2011 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    love to soup mail you! Can someone let me know how to send soup mail. Susan
  1. Date: 6/7/2011 3:40:00 PM

    Creative and lovely expressions on kittens, nicde images, Susan

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 2:11:00 PM

    I "adore "kittens also, Susan, nothing more lovable, thanks for the visit to my poetry~~

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 2:00:00 PM

    oh Susan this is cute and clever and my cats enjoy the twine too.. a super piece and so happy to see u as I was thinking of u just yesterday luv..