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Maybe, I love you

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Maybe, I love you

Inferno
Entry
Soul’s window

Liquid satin
Blanketing sin

Unintentional embrace
Spoken word
Spoken soft
Spoken
Whisper

Speechless

Longing

Longing
Tears
Held

Hold me

Hold me
As if God
Condemned our tomorrows
Suddenly

Ventricle screams
Smile rediscovered
Eyes unwrapped

Even after all these years

Rush
Waves
Crash

Song of infant
Church Bells

Desired

Discovery
This belief
That maybe

Just maybe…

© Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:58:00 PM
    Sweet....intense...padsionate....

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/21/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's how I roll. :) Thank you, Eileen!
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Just maybe...Just beautiful-'Unintentional embrace..Somehow makes me think of Pablo Neruda s verse.'Maybe i love you without knowing how when or where' : ).'Do you know Pablo?Pablo Neruda and Rumi..two of my favourite writers..except another favourite-That s Drake : ).Soft..romantic..full of yearning for love..Parapapapa-Im lovin it : )

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/8/2013 3:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know of Neruda very, very well. He was a hell of a poet. Rumi, as well. And LOL for the McDonalds reference!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHHA! You're too sweet, Charmaine! Thank you darling!
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Excellent poem Drake. I really enjoyed it, my name is Jiril Clemons. Check out some of my poetry. You might like it.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/22/2013 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks much, Jiril. Will do! Cheers!
  1. Date: 2/21/2012 9:59:00 PM
    excellent poetry..enjoyed the read, :) take care drake

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/22/2012 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi there! Why thank you very much! =)
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 6:36:00 AM
    This is so amazing! I love how you are so skillful with your words! Beautiful piece!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/8/2011 9:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Jessica! That is very kind of you to say. Thank you so so much. =)
  1. Date: 8/26/2011 9:39:00 AM
    You have a skillful art called words and you make them your own. Enjoyed your poems today Drake. Love, Vie.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/26/2011 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's very awesome of you to say, Vie. Thank you for that! Yours as well! :)
  1. Date: 8/24/2011 11:56:00 AM
    Awesome verse Drake, emotions leave one feeling spent.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/24/2011 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Heh, you got that right. Spent to the point of being "broke". :) Thank you so very much for that, Elizabeth.
  1. Date: 7/21/2011 9:52:00 AM
    I really liked how you ended this, Drake! Leaves so much to winder about-- I really enjoyed reading this, what a ride-- I do think the short lines here worked to the advantage of your poem, very cool how you wrote this! Thank you for dropping by my ballsy poem, lol bouncy, bouncy indeed :D Happy you enjoyed it :D Have a good week

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/24/2011 10:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're cute. LOL thank you for that! :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2011 7:05:00 PM
    maybe you should put Church Bells before Song of infant. john

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/24/2011 10:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thought of that, but I decided to switch that up. Thank you for that though, John! :)
  1. Date: 6/9/2011 7:48:00 PM
    honestly.. you have a gift of the perfect words. I truly see you as knowing what you want... and thinking if it is good for you... you are awesome.. enjoyed,..p.d.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/10/2011 4:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You know what, coming from you, that's truly something sweet. Extremely kind of you to say. You have me blushing. Thank you :)
  1. Date: 6/5/2011 10:04:00 AM
    Once again you did it Drake, absolutely love the roller coaster ride you took me on in this write.. Hope your weekend is a great one :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/5/2011 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WEEEEE for the roller coaster! Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
  1. Date: 6/5/2011 10:00:00 AM
    No maybe about it, Drake. This is love. When you've gone years between having someone special in your life, the romantic feeling is even stronger. Amazing use of the free verse form to convey your passion. Love, Carolyn

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/5/2011 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, I couldn't agree more with you Carolyn. Couldn't agree more...thank you.
  1. Date: 6/5/2011 7:03:00 AM
    wow, drake... a gentle explosion for the senses! the ending leaves much to ponder upon... dazzling! likey, likey much! :) huggs, nette

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/5/2011 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, your perspective on my ending is what I was aiming for. Thank you & I'm very glad you likey!
  1. Date: 6/5/2011 6:50:00 AM
    Nice therapeutic pauses with this form... Opened-ended questioning love. So lovely....so realistic. Glad you enjoyed the Fat sumo who split out his Speedo. ....PD said funny haiku and that's all I could conjure up that was funny at 3 a.m. Call me warped. Thanks for sharing your awesome poetry.NOW, go write some MORE. ENCORE! Gwendolen

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/5/2011 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, well stated there Gwen. :) Thank you so very much! :)
  1. Date: 6/5/2011 6:34:00 AM
    Excellent poetry my friend....MJF

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/5/2011 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Mike! Thank you so much! I do what I can. :)