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Willow Tree

High upon that willow tree
That's where I wanna be

We just go together like that
Just you and me

Way up in that willow tree
I met you on that sunny day
When the clouds were far far away

I love it when you touch me that way
How you run your fingers through my hair

Love is so crazy good with you 
And I really want to keep it that way

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  1. Date: 4/4/2013 8:06:00 PM

    Revisiting this one I liked so much in the past. I also just did a willow poem so that's why I was attracted again by this title when searching for an oldie of yours to read!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 4/4/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/15/2013 12:01:00 AM

    I really like this one. It is so sweet and yes, haiku are very hard to write, which is why you rarely see me doing one. haha. Don't worry. Very few people "get" haiku!!! I think it's a rare expert who can write one good enough to be in a journal of haiku.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 1/15/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:41:00 PM

    I loooove willow trees! And I love your poem :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 11/26/2012 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well, thank you Anne ;} have a sweet day ;}
  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:16:00 PM

    Nicely rhymed and expressed! Simple words with a romantic message! Best wishes, Keith

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 7/12/2012 10:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Keith ;}
  1. Date: 6/14/2011 10:29:00 PM

    Tender love up above the willow tree:) may it remain ! 4 ye comment thanks soundly banked :)

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 10:38:00 AM

    this was a beautiful written piece of creative poetry. i will put this in my favorites, love the flow of it, so refreshing and easy to read, and to understand what you your saying. thank you for comemting on Free Will.