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im so uffing---

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im so uffing---

So pemped up with aggression
Hindering my thought processes
Heart is sinking low to deep to mess with
Head stretched n
Scalp finger nail pressed in
More wound up than a spool of thread
My death is in front of my eyes no longer in my head
I'm so uffing pissed 
Hurt
Pick the whole world up n throw it on the grill
Watch it burn
Take an A K to the brain of every happy thing
Drenched in the blood of the slain
Use their body parts to play charades
Slit my skin 
Rip it off n expose within
A heart
Lungs 
Abdomen
All essential organs
Same as u all 
I'm so uffing hurting
I'm lurching 
Hunch back begging for a purpose to be deserving
I'm so uffing confused
Alone
What am I to do 
Alone who knew
Pleading with the man above to covet me in his hug 
Becuz
I wanna forfeit n try to catch another bus
I'm so uffing 
Alone
I'm so uffing 
Confused
I'm so uffing 
De-throned
I'm so uffing 
Hurt pissed off n lord only knows
I'm so uffing
Ready to go.....Peace

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  1. Date: 6/5/2011 10:49:00 AM
    Searing with emotion eddie and so much fervor in every line of expression..an impressive vent my friend.. enjoyed with luv.. life gets better every day .. positive is the key...luv..

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 10:14:00 AM
    Eddie, your poem is "uffing" awesome! The way your describe the pain and your desire to end it and find peace is something to which many readers can relate. I've had the same feeling at times, but find my peace in nature and faith. Best wishes, Carolyn