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Full Moon Crest

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Full Moon Crest

As I watch a creamed-full moon come to crest,
a darkened backdrop takes thoughts away;
into the night of heaven, where loved ones rest.

I stop for a moment to ease my aching breast,
releasing inward feelings I want to convey;
as I watch a creamed-full moon come to crest.

To have known and loved, I have been blest,
even to have known them for just one day.
Into the night of heaven, where loved ones rest.

I know humanly emotions are put to test,
when great trials of tribulations heavily weigh;
as I watch a creamed-full moon come to crest.

Someday all worldly possessions I will bequest,
somewhere my mortal bones will forever lay.
Into the night of heaven, where loved ones rest.

Even though my life is lively, still full of zest,
I will always long for the ones, who could not stay;
as I watch a creamed-full moon come to crest.
Into the night of heaven, where loved ones rest.

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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  1. Date: 6/27/2011 7:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Villanelle Me" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 11:30:00 AM
    Nicely done in villanelle form. Congrats Caryl on your fantastic win in this, gautami

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 7:50:00 PM
    This has some really pretty lines in it, caryl. I am happy to have read it tonight. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 3:28:00 PM
    The light of the moon does do that to one. Nice poem Caryl and a warm congratulations to you

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 1:19:00 PM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of catie, Caryl

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 9:43:00 AM
    Congrats Caryl on your HM in the contest .. an excellent honor for a creative poetic journey luv..

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 9:42:00 AM
    When I look at the night sky, I see the smiles of lost loved ones pearing through heaven's seems as bright stars, Caryl. Beautiful villanelle. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest! Love, Carolyn (PS - Jack and I loved your entry for the "ghosts" contest, but the contest stipulated it had to be about a paranormal experience. Wish we could have placed it as it was such a delight to read.)

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 3:32:00 AM
    This is a beautiful write Caryl. I always think that this sort of subject lends itself so well to a Villanelle (and vice versa!). All the best for the contest, i have been trying to write an entry myself but inspiration has deserted me! Best wishes Em :)

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 9:27:00 PM
    Utterly lovely Caryl ..the form suits your theme chosen for the contest..good luck luv..with this brilliantly penned creation ...luv..