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You 
I used to know
My heart had you at number one
Together we grew
Happened to place lucky from the few
But luck vaporized out of grasp
And our fire had turned to ash 
Wind scattered our remains
Distant is how we became
But wait, sparks brought out a flame
Warmth, desire and heart 
Saved what had fallen apart

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  1. Date: 6/3/2011 10:44:00 PM
    Wow. I happen to find your work here great. your a very wise poet. nicely done.

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 12:16:00 PM
    Enjoyed this short piece. You've managed to convey so much. Nice to see what was lost was re-found. Best wishes to you and have a great weekend Em :)